在英语书面表达中,增加细节内容的描述是必不可少的。在信息提纲类写作中,考生一定不能简单地翻译或者仅仅完成所给条目的指定内容;在看图作文中更不能只是轻描淡写图片内容,否则很有可能造成内容不充实、词数要求不达标或者结构不连贯等问题。适当增加细节内容,能够使习作流畅、丰满,达到应有的表达效果。
1. (2018年全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)另外,你最好带一些小礼物。
Besides, you'd better bring some little gifts.
→Besides, you'd better bring some little gifts, such as a special food or drink from your country.
2.我们青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救地球。
We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.
→We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example,we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, refuse to use singleuse products, plant more trees and save water and energy.